The Pure Shore Club by Jason R Lady

Three middle school-aged kids who share nothing in common besides being new students at a boarding school receive invitations to join the Pure Shore Club. They were given no information about what the club is or does, and when they arrive at the teacher’s office to learn more, they overhear an argument in which they learn that the club was disbanded several years earlier and will not be reformed. It’s all rather strange, and when given a clue from the man who wanted to restart the club, the three band together to learn more and to solve this mystery.

I read a review copy of this young adult novel, and it was a fun read. I loved the concept of a group of young people banding together to solve a mystery about the Pure Shore Club and why it was disbanded, and then learning and becoming more than what they ever thought was possible. This was a young-adult superhero story. And yes, it includes a bad guy with superpowers, and the appropriate explanations to go along with all of it. I truly enjoyed seeing how these three youngsters, who were so different from each other, also realized that their differences complemented them as a group. They were stronger together than they were alone, and they even managed to teach the adults around them a thing or two.

The Pure Shore Club is, in my mind, a story of developing friendships, as well as helping those around you, often quietly and without expecting praise or reward. The Pure Shore Club was represented as a community service club. And it was, though it also was so much more than just that. It was a way for young people who many considered outsiders and who often thought of themselves as being alone or outcasts, to become much more, to find friendships they never would have expected, and essentially to become a found family.

This was an enjoyable story that I believe would appeal to readers of all ages who enjoy some mystery, friendship and found family stories, and of course, superheroes. If you give this book a chance, I don’t think you’ll regret it.

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Forty Days by Morgan DeVivo

After a bomb explodes in a local mall where she had been shopping with her younger sister, Stella awakes with no memory of who she is or how she got there as she waits with a large group of other teenagers to be registered and assigned rooms in some sort of building. But where is she, actually? And why are they all given numbers and told not to tell anyone their name, just their number? It all seems rather odd. They also are told they need to follow the rules and not ask questions. But soon, what Stella learns is enough to convince her that these people do not have her interests at heart. She needs to find a way out, and she only has forty days.

This was a very interesting story from a first time author. I received a review copy of this book and very much enjoyed reading it. While not exactly a horror story, it is definitely a young adult, science fiction novel, with a touch of a thriller story in there as well. It involves what happens to people in a coma, as well as explores the state of being between life and death.

Miss DeVivo’s writing style differs greatly from her mother’s ( of whose books I have also read and reviewed several). And this debut novel is one that will keep readers wanting to know what happens next. A few times I thought I might have figured out how it was going to end, only to be surprised when I did learn what happened to the main character in this story. It is a shorter book than many that I have the chance to review these days, but it was a very enjoyable one to read.

I believe that anyone who enjoys reading young adult novels, science fiction, stories involving life versus death and the state of being between both, and those who enjoy mild thrillers will enjoy this book. I certainly enjoyed this first-time author’s debut novel, and am looking forward to seeing what she writes next. Recommended.

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Families Broken by PC Nottingham

Jab and Sanu are finally on their way back to their home island. Unfortunately, instead of the sought after peace treaty they had hoped to be returning with, they are accompanying the king and head of the Frenglese army who seeks to retake the island and the sacred city. While King Ridgerd may actually want peace, there is another king who has already arrived on the island with his own army, determined to retake the sacred city for himself. And he is not at all friendly to the Grovekeeper religion. He is a conqueror rather than one who seeks peace and harmony. So now Jab and Sanu, along with Sir Brouglas must find a way to save the island from not one but two armies, and if they are lucky, find a way to bring everyone to agree to a way where all three religions can live together in harmony and understanding.

I read a review copy of this book and very much enjoyed it. Of the three books in this trilogy, this book is the one that had me tearing up at times as I read. This book has some very emotional moments that are both heartwarming and heart wrenching. Jab and Sanu have faced so much pain in their young lives, and it seems that this book is one that will bring everything to a head, for good or ill.

I do not want to give anything away about this story, but if you have read the first two, then you really don’t want to miss reading this one. It is definitely the best of the trilogy. I’m going to deliberately keep my review of this book short, as I am afraid that if I don’t, I’ll accidentally give away too much of the story and spoil some of what happens for you. So I am going to end my review here, with the hope that you will give this one a try. While I may not have said much about the story itself, please trust that it is well worth the short time it will take you to read and enjoy this book. Recommended.

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Unbridled Reign by Chelsea Burton Dunn

Ash is a fighter who has been working as a trainer at the gym owned by the Lupo family. Before that, she had been forced into fighting for the Polish mafia when her father was killed while still owing them a great deal of money. Now, she works for the Lupos, suspecting, but not certain, that they are members of the Italian mafia. She is also physically attracted to both Sal Lupo and Adrian LaMartina. And when the man who becomes her new landlord turns out to be the same man that her father once owed a great deal of money to and refuses to renew her lease, her life becomes much more complicated.

I read a review copy of this book and greatly enjoyed it. Chelsea Burton Dunn is a wonderful author, and while this book differs in genre from most of the other books of hers that I have read, it is easily just as enjoyable as her other series are. This book does necessitate some trigger warnings, and with a fair amount of graphic sex in the story, it is clearly not meant for younger readers. Some of the themes that take place in this book include sex trafficking, violence, abuse, domestic abuse, depression, anxiety, alcohol abuse, and bisexuality. I found each topic to be handled carefully, but as these topics may be triggering for some, as a reader you do need to be aware that they are an important part of this story. It is a book that is very clearly meant for adult readers, due to the graphic sex and other themes running through this book and series.

Despite needing to include such warnings in my review, I have very much enjoyed reading this series. This was the third book in the series, and as there is at least one more topic that I am very curious about, I hope it is not the final book. And so I will be waiting as patiently as I can to learn whether or not there will be a fourth book (or even more than that) to come in this series. If you enjoy rather dramatic romance stories involving people and topics that seem like they should cause one to not enjoy a book, I would recommend giving this book and series a try. I will admit to being a little concerned when learning it was primarily about two mafia families, but I was very pleasantly surprised by how much I did enjoy this book and this series. As I said above, the difficult and sensitive subjects were handled quite well. And while they were a very necessary part of the tale, they were not the main subject of the story.

The main characters in this story are very well described, and while in some ways they could be considered forced into the life they now lead, they have made the best of it that they can in order to keep those they care about safe, without causing unnecessary harm to those who are innocent. While the mafia is in general often considered the “bad guys” in any story, here, we are shown that it is possible that in the case of the characters in this series, they are not actually the “bad guys.” They may not entirely be the “good guys,” given that they are members of two crime families, but they fall more on the side of good than the side of evil, in my opinion. So if you can give this book and series a try, I would recommend reading them. I know that I enjoyed reading them a great deal, and am hoping that there will be more of this series to come in the future.

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Twelve Months by Jim Butcher

Wizard Harry Dresden and his allies managed to win the battle that saved the world, though much of Chicago was destroyed in the process. The woman that Harry loved was killed, leaving him heartbroken. Yet, it was still up to him and his friends to defend the people of Chicago from those who would take advantage of the chaos and destruction around them. Mab has arranged his betrothal as her Winter Knight to Lara Raith, a Vampire of the White Court in order to forge an alliance. While it is not something either Harry or Lara truly wants, this alliance is necessary if they want to be able to help the people of Chicago rebuild and survive. Ghouls and others have come, brought by all the death and destruction. And alone, even Harry isn’t enough to save everyone important to him. But in order for this to work, he needs to find a way to overcome his personal heartbreak and pain. The question seems to be, can he manage to overcome the current challenges in front of him? Or will he succumb to the despair that he has been struggling with?

I enjoyed reading this book. In my opinion, this story is about Harry’s healing from what seems an insurmountable amount of pain, both physical and emotional. He wants to keep helping his friends, family, and his city, while at the same time, a significant part of him just wants to give in to his despair and pain. He has quite a bit to overcome, and new challenges and problems keep arising that require his attention. But he also has friends who are there to help him, family who care about him, and his new fiancee and her people are there to help too. And more than anything else, he has a daughter who needs him. So he has quite a few reasons to find his way back to the man he once was.

The story itself is at times quite negative and painful. But that is the character’s state of mind at the beginning of the book when he feels he has lost pretty much everything he cares about, yet he must still find a way to not give in to despair. And as the story progresses, we can begin to see him finding his way back from the brink, slowly finding reasons to continue to fight for the good in the world, and to see that there are those who still love him and who are there to help him, if he will let them. And while yes, he hurts and likely will for quite some time, we can see that he is beginning to heal and to both find and see the good things that still exist around him. And that is why I enjoyed reading this book. Because no matter how dark the world may seem at the moment, it won’t always be that way.

When I began reading it, I was, myself, feeling in a somewhat dark place. The world around me has quite a few problems right now, and I was worried that a story with a main character who was in so much pain would make me feel worse. But as the story progressed and he began to heal, it helped me to also see that there is still good in the world. And that as we work to help those around us, things can and will become better for everyone. This book, to me, is saying that no matter how bad things may seem right now, that if you want things to get better and are willing to put in the work to make it happen, that the world around us can improve. It won’t happen overnight, and it will very likely take a lot of time and effort, but nothing is impossible.

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Big Little: A Family Morris Story Story Written by Bennet Walker Art by Cal Hobbes

Shelly is a little girl who has both a big sister and a big brother. This story seems to be about what she wants to do one day.

I read a review copy of this story meant for young children. It’s been a very long time since I’ve had any children young enough for a book like this, but the first thing that I want to talk about is the art that shows this story. It was perfect for the book. It was beautiful and clearly showed how little Shelly felt as the day progressed.

The story itself, however, I had a few problems with. I loved that the family was a blended family. But what bothered me was that the entire way through the book, the mother watched every member of the family tell Shelly that she was too little for what she wanted to do. And in each instance there was never any suggestion of what they could do to include Shelly or of something else that the little girl could do instead that would be just as much fun as what her siblings were doing.

I feel that this story could have used a developmental editor. I kept wanting the mother, or any other member of the family, to say or do something to include Shelly rather than just telling her she was too little. The further I got in this story, the sadder I felt for the little girl. (Again, I was impressed that the artist included the sad and disappointed look on Shelly’s face in each instance.)

While I do recognize that older / teenage siblings don’t always go out of their way to include a young sibling in what they are doing, why didn’t the mother notice how sad her daughter was getting after each time she was told she was too little. Maybe I’m reading too much into the story, but if this is a typical day for Shelly, the story seems to be saying that because she’s little, she can’t do anything. And I feel that is the wrong message to send a child.

For me, this book needs something that only Shelly is small enough to do. Turning the tables on her older siblings by having them be too big for something would have made the ending of the story much more meaningful and powerful. But while the ending does bring a big smile to Shelly’s face, it wasn’t something that she was the only one small enough to do. And for me, it didn't make up for all the negative “You’re too small” comments from every family member—including her mother—throughout Shelly’s Day.

I would rate the artwork for this book at four stars, but the story itself, for me, was only a one star because of the way it left me feeling disappointed and sad for Shelly rather than happy about her having something special that no one else could do because they were too big.

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Home Shattered by PC Nottingham

Nasilid the Liberator has successfully retaken the city of ZelZaytun back from the Sprouters who had conquered the island two generations before and who had killed all the members of the Grovekeeper religion who lived there. But unlike the previous conquerors, this time, peace between all three religions, Grovekeeper, Sprouter, and Mulcher, is hoped for. A chance for all who seek peace and to spend time with the sacred Gnaverwood tree may do so.

In an effort to let the other kingdoms leaders know that this is what is hoped for, Nasalid sends Jab, Sanu, Sir Brouglas, and a few others across the ocean to meet with the Sprouter King and to bring this message of a sought-after peace between the three religions. Unfortunately, while the message is received, the country is in a bit of a turmoil with a new king and a religious head who is determined to force them into a religious war to retake the city and the sacred tree.

I read a review copy of this book and enjoyed it as much as I did the first one in the series. Both Jab and Sanu grow as individuals and as their own squirrels throughout the book, learning a great deal about not only themselves, but the others they come across. There is much that they need to deal with—treachery, betrayal, worry—but each is stronger than they realized, and each one has their own strengths that they bring to the table when trying to help those around them find solutions to some very large problems.

I enjoyed reading this young adult novel. It was fun and carefully thought out. It shows that sometimes, we don’t always realize that those who may seem very young, might actually have viable solutions to some very large problems that they shouldn’t have to deal with at their age. We just need to be willing to listen and pay attention when they try to help rather than ignoring their suggestions from a mistaken belief that they haven’t the knowledge or experience to truly understand something. Quite often, they know more than we realize they do.

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Pentimento Mori: An Art History Mystery by Valeria Corciolani

Edna Silvera is an art historian who appears to prefer her privacy to being in the public eye, even though she is a renowned expert in her field. When sent out by her boss to participate in a public ceremony, she stumbles across a dead body as well as an ancient piece of artwork, and finds herself in the middle of trying to help solve both mysteries.

I read a review copy of this book. It was the author’s first English-translated novel. I did enjoy reading it, though for quite a bit of the book I was confused as to why parts of it were told from the perspective of a chicken. It was quite a while into the story before I realized that said chicken was actually someone who seemed to spend most of his time pretending he was a chicken. (At least I think he was pretending, though it is possible that he actually believed he was a chicken.)

The author clearly knows quite a bit about ancient art, the techniques involved in creating the paints, and the symbolism used within the artwork itself. It was a rather impressive display of knowledge, and an integral part in solving the secondary mystery as well as the murder itself. There were a number of twists and turns in this story that led up to both the art mystery and the murder, and this was a story that I was not able to solve entirely on my own while reading the story. While all the clues were there, some of them were subtle enough that I missed seeing them. And that makes it much more interesting to me than a mystery that I was able to see what was coming well before the ending.

I will admit that at times, I was a little confused and a bit overwhelmed by the amount of art history knowledge within this story, but overall I did find it to be an interesting book that I did enjoy reading. I think that anyone who enjoys reading about art, art history, art symbolism or murder mysteries involving ancient art, would enjoy reading this book.

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Brothers Divided by P.C. Nottingham

Two young squirrel brothers have just buried their parents. On that same day, they encounter a knight who is seeking to warn the townsrodents that he believes their town is in danger from suspected nearby raiders. He has come to offer the villagers safety in shelter in the town of Olihort (still called ZelZaytum by those of the Grovekeeper faith), under the Sapling’s protection. But given that many of the families can remember when their grandparents who lived in the town were slaughtered by the army that invaded to claim the sacred Gnaverwood tree as their own, no one from the town will believe such an offer is meant in peace.

That same day, the army of Nasalid the Liberator sets a trap for the armies who claimed the lands as theirs. As the two forces meet, the brothers believe they each see the other killed, unaware that their family member still lives and has been rescued by the opposing army. In turn, the brothers decide to aid the side that rescued them, hoping to find a way to restore peace to their land. But where religious differences are involved, is such a thing actually possible? Can multiple religions actually coexist peacefully together?

I read a review copy of this book and found it entertaining and thought provoking. And for a short book that is quickly read, it did manage to contain quite a bit of story and action. In some ways, it made me think (very loosely) of some of William Shakespeare’s plotlines. Though not truly the same, I could see vague similarities in several places.

There were both heartwarming and heartbreaking moments in this book, as each brother truly believed the other was killed, and they must cope with a very trying time, with a religious war looming and them being unable to avoid it. Many involved do seem to want peace, but unfortunately, there are also those who are determined to continue to provoke the other side in an attempt to justify a complete destruction of their supposed enemies, including those who are innocents.

I believe this young adult novel would be a good fit for anyone interested in reading fantasy stories that involve religious differences and that attempt to show how often peaceful solutions and coexistence are possible, if only everyone involved is willing to talk out their issues and find a compromise. I enjoyed reading this book, and found the ending hopeful, though clearly the adventures of the two brothers, Jeb and Sanu, are not yet over, as peace between this land and opposing kingdoms cannot be assured unless everyone is willing to accept a peaceful solution. I will be looking forward to seeing what happens next in this series.

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GMC: Goal, Motivation, & Conflict by Debra Dixon

This book was required reading for a class that I am taking. And while parts of the topic seemed to be common sense to me, the book does have some very good ideas on how a writer can more easily not only discover their characters’ goals, motivations, and the conflicts they will face, but how to find ways to show each of those items to the readers as the story progresses.

If the writer doesn’t know what drives a character, or what lengths they are willing to go to in order to achieve those goals, how can they possibly express that to their readers? In order to help the writer with this concept, the author of this book has shown us some simple charts that will help to define both the internal and external things that drive a character, and make each of them unique.

I did appreciate these charts & the ideas behind each of them, as it makes the goals, motivations, and conflicts quite clear to the writer, and allows them to develop their plots accordingly. I also loved the  examples provided to us by Ms. Dixon. I may not have seen each of the movies that she used as an example, but even the ones I was unfamiliar with provided enough of a context for me to understand the intended story of those films.

In addition to these charts and examples, Ms. Dixon talks about the purposes of scenes, what makes for a good and useful scene, and what might be an unnecessary scene. Again, examples are provided for each. And there are exercises throughout the book that should be helpful for most any writer.

Another topic that is discussed involves query letters, and the recommended way to format one to encourage an agent or publisher to want more information about a story, thus decreasing the likelihood of a rejection. (This seems like a helpful topic for most writers.)

Overall, I believe this would be a very helpful book for writers, as well as editors (both copyeditors and developmental editors). The exercises can easily be applied to any book that has been written, whether it is one that has been published or one that is being edited prior to publication or submission for publication.

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Corrupted Desires by Chelsea Burton Dunn

Ingrid was in an abusive relationship with a man who was using her to try and work his way up the ladder within the Irish Mafia. She was a “White Hat” computer hacker and very good at what she did. However, using her skills to support a crime family that was known for sex trafficking as well as other criminal activities was a step too far for her. So she plotted and executed an escape from that world, hoping to stay far away and live a normal, unassuming life raising her daughter, Nora. But in order to do that she needed to find a job where she could support herself and her child. She found such a job working in a coffee shop, not realizing that she was working for an Italian crime family, though not all of the family members were part of the mafia themselves at that point in time. But things soon escalated after the events of book one in this series, causing both Ingrid and Nora’s lives to get more interesting and less unassuming after meeting Enzo, the family’s computer specialist.

I read a review copy of this book and enjoyed it just as much as I did the previous book in this series. I do feel the need to mention that this series has themes of sex trafficking and violence, and this book also touches on themes of body dysmorphia, abuse (both mental and physical) and does include graphic sex. This book is not intended for younger readers, and for some people it may be triggering. But I will say that despite this book being about mafia families, the main characters in this book are actually the good guys, comparatively speaking. And the story is very well written and enjoyable.

It is a different type of series from many of the other books that I have read from this author, but like her other series, I did greatly enjoy reading this book/series, and am looking forward to reading the third book in this series to find out what happens next. (I have my suspicions on who will be the focus in that book, but like the rest of you, I will have to wait and see if I am correct.) This has been a fun series to read thus far, despite the necessary trigger warnings. And it is one that I would recommend, as it is a very enjoyable romance series.

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Plot & Structure by James Scott Bell

This book was assigned reading for a class that I am taking. While it is a good book and I did find parts of it helpful, for me, this book seemed rather basic. I do a lot of reading (of both fiction and non-fiction) every single day, so I regularly notice many of the things that are talked about in this book. For me, I felt like the author was telling me things I already knew, though I do recognize that in general, that may not be the case for others who read this book.

That being said, for anyone who is new to writing fiction or who wants a little refresher to help with their plots and the structure of their story, I do believe that this book would be quite useful. It includes a large number of examples and explanations of the why and how behind what the author is attempting to explain. The book also includes a large number of exercises for those seeking to improve their skills when it comes to developing their plot and story structure.

The exercises are clearly well thought out, and the reasons for why each exercise should be helpful are well explained. So anyone who has questions about plot and story structure will likely benefit from reading this book and trying at least a few of the recommended exercises.

I do feel that this book is likely to be of more help to newer writers than to those who have been writing and have had several pieces of their work published. It may also be of help to beginning developmental editors. (This book does not deal with grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, or point of view, so is less likely to be of much help to copyeditors, though they might also find some of the subjects covered by this book useful.) But overall, I do feel it would be a helpful and useful book for any fiction writer.

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The Cartagena Cartel by T.C. Roberts

Archie Flynn has fled from the law, travelling to a country that does not have an extradition policy with his home country. He is struggling to mend his broken heart, as the woman he threw his life away for has chosen to remain with another man. So what else can he do but try to drown his sorrows and find other women to take his mind off of Jezebel, the woman he believes he still loves.

I am going to start off by saying that I do not believe that I was the intended audience for this novel. It is a book that can be classified as “lad-lit” and involves Archie seeking solace in drugs and the bed of women that he has only just met. This naturally gets him in trouble in Cartagena, when he runs afoul of the drug cartels and finds himself the victim of a “zombie drug” that causes him to wake up in an unknown area, wearing only his underwear, and uncertain how he got there. Everything that he had with him has been stolen, and the police seem unwilling to do anything to help him. 

I did have some issues with this book. It really could have used another round with an editor/proofreader, as while everything was spelled correctly, it wasn’t always the correct word used. I also ran across a couple of sections where the text appeared to have been repeated verbatim from partway through the previous chapter. I am uncertain if that was intentional or not as it happened more than once, but for me, it was confusing.

I also had a few instances where I found myself taking issue with actions that I could not see as being realistic given the circumstances, even for a fiction novel. Yes, I am sure that there are good people who are willing to help by loaning money to someone who has been drugged and robbed, but in a city where it sounds like it is a common occurrence and the local police are paid off by the drug cartels so are unwilling to help, it is a very real possibility that the person who has been robbed will never be able to repay a potentially significant amount loaned to them…  Well, I have  problems believing it. And given that the main character does not appear to have not learned from his misadventures, this book just was not meant for me.

While I am not the target audience for this book, those who enjoy reading about someone trying to bury his heartbreak over a woman he thought he loved by repeating the behavior that got him into trouble in the first place, or who enjoy reading books about someone’s misadventures with the law, with various women, with drugs and drug cartels, or who are simply looking for a book about someone’s misadventures in other countries, you might enjoy this book. The story itself wasn’t something I considered horrible, just highly unbelievable at times. Though I do have to say that I saw the likelihood of Archie getting “roofied” coming. That part was very believable.

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